Writing Material 02

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while

First of all, it is difficult for high school students to adopt a completely objective attitude toward their teachers when they are required to perform an evaluation task.

Therefore

Furthermore, the evaluations that the naive students give may lead to a popularity contest among teachers, who will endeavor to gain favors from the students and compete for higher rankings rather than be competent and responsible teachers.

Meanwhile, if teachers receive too many unwarranted criticisms, it will be really hard for them to concentrate on their instruction and one bad consequence is that they will lose the motivation and confidence to teach.

Lastly, if high school students are free to assess their teachers, they tend to have a psychological advantage and even misbehave in an intolerable way because they think teachers are at their mercy.

As a result

In conclusion

On the contrary, this practice will not only disturb teachers and disrupt classroom order but also tend to indulge students who misconduct themselves and leave themselves no space for improvement.